Thursday, 17 January 2013


Snowflake so small, just one,

Delicately landing on the rock

To render in the sun
                                      -- Veronica Madsen

 There once was a boy named Ben
Who had to be home by ten,

While out on a date,
He saw he was late
And was never heard of again
                                          -- Veronica Madsen


The form of writing a haiku had a great deal of influence on this poem about the snowflake. Notice the image it reveals and that several words were chosen carefully to create a deeper meaning.
The limerick was fun to write which I believe is due to the form. It was easy to fall into the rhythm (aabba) while writing this. The silly idea behind the limerick made it ‘dance’ onto the page.

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