It is apparent that the theme of the poem “Do
Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” by Dylan Thomas is of death. It is human
nature to fight for life. The first five
stanzas of the poem are generalized. Stating
that old age should be fast and furious near the end of life; “Old age should
burn and rave at close of day”, making it seem unfair the aged must slowly die
after living so long. The observations
made of the wise, the good, the wild and the grave are interesting. It illustrates to the reader that no matter
what type of person one is, or the regrets one may have throughout a lifetime, do
not matter in death. “And learned, too
late, they grieved it on its way,…”.
However in the last stanza the writer formulates the poem so the topic becomes
personal by adding the plea to his own father who is on his death bed “And you,
my father, there on the sad height,”; “do not go gentle into that good night”. The tone of the poem is poignant; do not give
up the fight be brave in the face of death, even though death is inevitable.
This poem has a total of six stanzas, the
first five stanzas have three lines and the sixth stanza has four. It is written in Villanella style, aba aba
aba. Notice every other line rhymes and
the last line of every other stanza is repeated, making it song like as in a
Villanella. The poet used metaphors and similes,
“Their frail deeds might have danced…” describing the ‘good men’ and their
feeling of incompleteness. “Blind eyes
could blaze like meteors and be gay,” telling how ‘grave men’ (serious men) are
enlightened to the real joys of life.
Veronica,
ReplyDeletePay careful attention to flow. Your sentences here are often disjointed, which leads to both an uneven style and an unfocused content.
Let me show you what I mean.
In your first few sentences:
"It is apparent that the theme of the poem “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” by Dylan Thomas is of death.
It is human nature to fight for life.
The first five stanzas of the poem are generalized.
Stating that old age should be fast and furious near the end of life..."
Those three sentences have no logical connection to one another. There are many ways to fix this, but the two simplest are rephrase or reorder. Move your sentences around until they are logically connected, or rephrase them to show the connection.
For example, you can create a logical connection between your two first sentences like this:
"It is apparent that the theme of the poem “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” by Dylan Thomas is of death. Thomas argues that it is human nature to fight for life."
OR
"It is apparent that the theme of the poem “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” by Dylan Thomas is of death. Thomas's position depends upon the fact that it is human nature to fight for life."
Your fourth sentence there is actually a sentence fragment: there isn't a verb. It's a common mistake; be aware that verbs in a form that ends with "ing" (like "stating" "walking") can't be the verb in a sentence. You need an "is" and an object. Who or what is stating?